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写开发信的七大原则

七大原则: 
一、Courtesy 礼貌 
语言要有礼且谦虚,及时地回信也是礼貌的表现。 
例如: 
We have 
received with many thanks your letter of 20 May, and we take the pleasure of 
sending you our latest catalog. We wish to draw your attention to a special 
offer which we have made in it. 
You will be particularly interested in 
a special offer on page 5 of the latest catalog enclosed, which you requested in 
your letter of 20 May. 

二、Consideration 
体谅 
写信时要处处从对方的角度去考虑有什么需求,而不是从自身出发,语气上更尊重对方。 
例如: 
“You 
earn 2 percent discount when you pay cash. We will send you the brochure next 
month. ”就比 “We allow 2 percent discount for cash payment. We won't be able to 
send you the brochure this month.” 要好。 

三、Completeness 
完整 
一封商业信函应概况了各项必需的事项,如邀请信应说明时间、地点等,确忌寄出含糊不清的信件。 

四、Clarity 
清楚 
意思表达明确,要注意: 
(一)避免用词错误: 
例如:As to the steamers 
sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco, we have bimonthly direct 
services. 
此处bimonthly有歧义:可以是twice a month 或者once two 
month.故读信者就迷惑了,可以改写为: 
1.We have two direct sailings every month from 
Hong Kong to San Francisco. 
2.We have semimonthly direct sailing from 
Hong Kong to San Francisco. 
3.We have a direct sailing from Hong Kong 
to San Francisco. 
(二)注意词语所放的位置: 
例如: 
1. We shall be 
able to supply 10 cases of the item only. 
2. We shall be able to supply 
10 cases only of the 
item. 
前者则有两种商品以上的含义。 
(三)注意句子的结构: 
例如: 
1.We 
sent you 5 samples yesterday of the goods which you requested in your letter of 
May 20 by air. 
2.We sent you, by air, 5 samples of the goods which you 
requested in your letter of May 20. 

五、Conciseness 
简洁 
(一)避免废话连篇: 
例如: 
1.We wish to acknowledge receipt of 
your letter...可改为:We appreciate your letter... 
2.Enclosed herewith 
please find two copies of...可改为: We enclose two copies 
of... 
(二)避免不必要的重复: 
(三)短句、单词的运用: 
Enclosed 
herewith----->enclosed 
at this time----->now 
due to the 
fact that----->because 
a draft in the amount of $1000----->a 
draft for $1000 
六、Concreteness 具体 
七、Correctness 正确

王玲玲
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2018-08-27 15:18:43
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