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To whom if may concern, 

How are you? This is Joyce from Tinpak in China. 

You ever enquired us some tin boxes and I am wondering if you are still interested in our tin boxes. We have some nice new tins and I would like to invite you to have a look. 

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You are also welcome to visit our website at www.tinpak.com to look at our beautiful archived designs. 

Why do business with Tinpak? 

Tinpak has more than 200 well-trained workers and 100 press machines in 8 lines. Each day we can produce 80,000 specialty tin containers! Proofs can be sent within 1-2 weeks after we receive your artwork. Delivery can be executed within 2-4 weeks upon receipt of sample approval. Quality is guaranteed!

Want to know more?  

Please contact us today, and see what we can offer you.  

Best wishes,