外贸社区
吴金英
多版本再别康桥
1、徐志摩版本: 轻轻的我走了,正如我轻轻的来; 我轻轻的招手,作别西天的云彩。 那河畔的金柳,是夕阳中的新娘; 波光里的艳影,在我的心头荡漾。 软泥上的青荇,油油的在水底招摇; 在康河的柔波里,我甘心做一条水草! 那榆荫下的一潭,不是清泉, 是天上虹揉碎在浮藻间,沉淀着彩虹似的梦。 寻梦?撑一支长篙,向青草更青处漫溯, 满载一船星辉,在星辉斑斓里放歌。 但我不能放歌,悄悄是别离的笙箫; 夏虫也为我沉默,沉默是今晚的康桥。 悄悄的我走了,正如我悄悄的来; 我挥一挥衣袖,不带走一片云彩。 2、英文版: Saying Good-bye to Cambridge Again Very quietly I take my leave As quietly as I came here; Quietly I wave good-bye To the rosy clouds in the western sky. The golden willows by the riverside Are young brides in the setting sun; Their reflections on the shimmering waves Always linger in the depth of my heart. The floatingheart growing in the sludge Sways leisurely under the water; In the gentle waves of Cambridge I would be a water plant! That pool under the shade of elm trees Holds not water but the rainbow from the sky; Shattered to pieces among the duckweeds Is the sediment of a rainbow-like dream? To seek a dream? Just to pole a boat upstream To where the green grass is more verdant; Or to have the boat fully loaded with starlight And sing aloud in the splendour of starlight. But I cannot sing aloud Quietness is my farewell music; Even summer insects heep silence for me Silent is Cambridge tonight! Very quietly I take my leave As quietly as I came here; Gently I flick my sleeves Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away 3、粤语搞笑版: 我静静鸡散水,   就好似我静静鸡咁踩嚟;   我静静鸡yaap手,   同啲云讲声“系噉先喇,喂“”   河边嗰啲金柳,   好似个新娘喺黄昏晒太阳;   反映喺水上面个靓样,   喺我个心度浮吓浮吓咁样。   (以下几段悭番)   但我唔可以唱K,   讲拜拜嗰支笛衰咗;   热天的昆虫都为我收声,   剑桥今晚真喺哑咗!   我静静鸡散水,   就好似我静静鸡咁踩嚟;   我拍拍箩柚,   一啲云都毋拎,嫌重得滞。 4、东北版: 鸟儿悄的我走了, 正如我蔫巴的来; 我得了八嗖的招手, 磨叽西天的云彩。 那泡子边的金柳, 是夕阳中的媳妇儿; 波光里的倩磴儿, 在我的心头汩涌。 埋了巴汰的青幸, 油了巴叽的在水底赛脸; 在康河的旮旯里, 我甘心做一把蒿子。 那榆荫下的一座, 不是蘑菇,是个猫楼; 揉希碎在浮躁间, 沉淀着贼拉彩虹的梦。 嘎哈啊?划拉一把笤帚疙瘩, 向青菜贼青那嘎的漫溯; 整一兜子星辉, 在星辉斑斓里嗷唠两嗓子。 但我不能嗷唠, 悄悄是滚犊子的笙箫; 扑勒蛾子也为我蔫儿了, 蔫儿了是这宿儿的康桥! 我傻了巴叽地走了, 正如我飚的呼的来; 我得瑟得瑟衣袖, 不带走一嘎达云彩。 5、四川版: 轻飘飘地我梭起走啰,就好比我轻飘飘地梭起来; 我轻飘飘地甩一下手杆,离开啰西边那堆云坨坨儿。 那河沟头黄呼呼的柳树,是太阳落山时候的新姑娘儿; 水花花儿头的乖影子,在我胸口里面拽来拽去。 稀泥巴高头的野葱葱,油腻腻的在河底下疯痴痴地板; 在康河耙弄弄的水泡儿里面,我巴不得是一堆绿青苔。 在榆树阴凉地方的湿塘塘,不是从泥沙沙头浸出来的清水; 是天上边彩虹,捏烂啰滚进烂草堆,埋起来的五颜六色的梦。 到处睃?拿一根长竹竿,朝比绿叶子还绿的地方乱独; 装满一木船星星儿的光亮,在明晃晃的坝坝头干吼。 不过我不能够干吼,悄悄梭起走才是散伙的喇叭调子; 推屎耙(儿)也在旁边大气都不敢出,不开腔就是今天半夜的康桥。 轻飘飘地我梭起走喽,就好比我轻飘飘地梭起来; 我把袖子挽得邦紧,不拿跑一丁点儿云坨坨儿。 6、河南版: 慢摸儿的俺跑了,   就象俺慢摸儿的来; 俺较起儿的晃晃手,   离开西板儿的云彩。 乖乖你看河膀的金柳   是后晚黑儿中的新媳妇儿 水波纹儿里有恁多花里胡哨,   让我的心痒不及溜的。 臭腥泥上的狼尾(yi)巴蒿,   光溜溜的在水底啊(dia)招摇; 在康河的软水圈子里,   俺喜欢当一把水闸草 那树凉意儿下的一窝儿,   我的哥不是清泉,是顶上虹 搓碎在水闸草里面,   沉淀着花里胡哨的梦。 找梦?拿一根长棍子,   向黑青黑青的闸草里乱搅, 俺整满一大船星辉,   在花里胡哨里胡吼 妈呀俺不敢胡吼   慢摸儿是跑了的调儿; 凑猪儿也为我憋气儿,   憋气儿是今儿后晚黑儿的康桥! 慢摸儿的我跑了,   就象俺慢摸儿的来; 俺较起儿的晃晃手,   不拿走一嘎蛋儿云彩。 7、陕北版: 悄迷各触眼的我走了,就像我悄迷各处的来, 活抖活抖鹅儿袖袖,不提溜走一疙瘩云彩. 水跟底的草草啊,各揪在那儿悄悄间活颤. 阵儿我揍站在这达烂,你敢把老子闯给(降调)哈? 表(降调)看你长的高浪, 你这个疙跑把老子惹火了看老子拿上一疙打砖疙蛋把你花红脑子倒出来张 你走在黑天打动的大该上,穿着忽行打扇的破布散子, 代着偏流打挂的恶水帽子,你突鼻囊嗓的,还把你能的. 你道忘蓝!那天你暂再土个但上看欣鑫~一个淡下起了亲盆大鱼! 你召了忙蓝!一火跑开蓝!一个淡把你擦倒蓝! 一获把你楚成个泥个蛋!把我失笑的来来!
AndrewLi
Saying Good-bye to Cambridge Again Very quietly I take my leave As quietly as I came here; Quietly I wave good-bye To the rosy clouds in the western sky. The golden willows by the riverside Are young brides in the setting sun; Their reflections on the shimmering waves Always linger in the depth of my heart. The floatingheart growing in the sludge Sways leisurely under the water; In the gentle waves of Cambridge I would be a water plant! That pool under the shade of elm trees Holds not water but the rainbow from the sky; Shattered to pieces among the duckweeds Is the sediment of a rainbow-like dream? To seek a dream? Just to pole a boat upstream To where the green grass is more verdant; Or to have the boat fully loaded with starlight And sing aloud in the splendour of starlight. But I cannot sing aloud Quietness is my farewell music; Even summer insects heep silence for me Silent is Cambridge tonight! Very quietly I take my leave As quietly as I came here; Gently I flick my sleeves Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away
2008-07-03 12:05:47
罗新
:lol:
2008-07-02 11:39:19
lilinda
:o
2008-07-02 11:33:36
王连坤
老徐的诗,深受各地群众欢迎
2008-07-02 11:25:05
吴金英
估计徐志摩要看到了,胡子都能笑翘了
2008-07-02 10:06:14
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