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麻烦大家，帮我看看我的开发信！！
大家好！
我是生产门把手的五金厂！
刚开始搞外贸，帮忙看看以下我写的开发信，谢谢
Dear Sir or Madam，
Good day!
We are "door & window hardware" Professional factory in China,In various door handles and enjoy a good reputation.
We major in the following items:
Furniture handles、Tube lever handles、Solid lever handles、Square tube lever handles、Handle with plates、Knob handles、Thumb turn & indicator、
Rosette,escutcheon & spindle etc.
If you are interested in, please let us know , we will be happy to give you best price and quality products.
Hope to hear good news from you.
Best wishes and regards
Lucy Xie
公司名：***********
Add:************
Tel**********
Fax************
Mail：*************
网站***********
我是生产门把手的五金厂！
刚开始搞外贸，帮忙看看以下我写的开发信，谢谢
Dear Sir or Madam，
Good day!
We are "door & window hardware" Professional factory in China,In various door handles and enjoy a good reputation.
We major in the following items:
Furniture handles、Tube lever handles、Solid lever handles、Square tube lever handles、Handle with plates、Knob handles、Thumb turn & indicator、
Rosette,escutcheon & spindle etc.
If you are interested in, please let us know , we will be happy to give you best price and quality products.
Hope to hear good news from you.
Best wishes and regards
Lucy Xie
公司名：***********
Add:************
Tel**********
Fax************
Mail：*************
网站***********
赵瑞先
内容太才长了，说重点
2011-07-23 15:25:26
KevinChen
虽然有很多需要提高的地方，但是新人写的东西还是值得鼓励的。
2011-07-23 13:27:20
laokim
太普通了，将你公司及产品的特点优势之类的东西突出来，能打动客人，做你这行业的公司的开发信，客人每天都会收到不少.....
2011-07-23 11:34:03
杜晓菲
这里有很多关于开发信得文章，有的很经典，建议你去看看。
2011-07-20 17:02:48
陈雪芬
英文是不是有点中国味太重啊，浅见浅见，别太介意哦
2011-07-17 17:08:09
陈钰丹
标题？没有标题，
2011-07-13 20:49:25
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