开发信范本
[color=red:b9fe6b12ee]开发信范本1[/color:b9fe6b12ee]
外贸英语往来信件,包括传真,电邮,信函等,是当今国际贸易交流中的主要载体,其主要目的就是为了传递商务信息。因此合格的英语往来信件必须是以简洁的语言、明晰的结构来表述完整的内容,同时,最好还要可以体现出成熟的业务思维。 一笔定单的开始往往始于出口商主动向潜在客户发信建立业务关系,而这个建立关系的开发函的内容,个人认为可以包括如下内容:第一: 说明客户信息来源,即如何取得对方的资料。作为贸易商,个人SOHO者,可以通过驻外使馆商务参赞处、商会、商务办事处、银行、第三家公司的介绍,或者在企业名录、各种传媒广告、网络上寻得客户资料;也可以在交易会、展览会上结识;甚至是在进行市场调查时获悉。因此我们可以如下方式来表明客户信息的来源:
1) We learned from the Commercial Counselor's Office of our Embassy in your country that you are interested in Chinese handicraft.
2) Mr.Bowins, Head of Arcolite Electric AG has recommended you to us as a leading importer in Korea of lightweight batteries for vehicles.
3) We have obtained your name and address from the Internet.
4) Our market survey showed that you are the largest importer of cases and bags in Egypt.当然还有很多的英文表达方式,不一一列出。第
二: 言明去函目的一般来说,我们给客户写信,总是以开发业务,建立市场,拓宽产品销路为目的。可以有如下的表达方式:
1) In order to expand our products into South America, we are writing to you to seek cooperate possibilities.
2) We are writing to you to establish long-term trade relations with you.3) We wish to express our desire to enter into business relationship with you.
第三:本公司概述这里所说的本公司介绍,包括对公司性质、业务范围、宗旨等基本情况的介绍,以及对公司某些相对优势的介绍,比如:经验丰富、供货渠道稳定、有广泛的销售网等。我们可以用英文如下表达:
1) We are a leading company with many years' experience in machinery export business.
2) We enjoy a good reputation internationally in the circle of textile.
3) We have our principle as "Clients' needs come first".
4) A credible sales network has been set up and we have our regular clients from over 100 countries and regions worldwide.5) Located in Shanghai, we take the advantage to set up our solidified production basis in coasted and inland areas.
第四:产品介绍这一部分最重要,一定花心思去写。如果我们已经知道客户有明确的需求,比如需要某某服装,那么我们会选取某某服装进行具体的推荐性介绍,反正就是针对客户需求的特定介绍;如果我们只拿到客户的名片,不太清楚客户的需求,那么我们就把公司经营产品的整体情况,如质量标准,价格水平,打样速度、交货速度等作为笼统的介绍。当然附上目录,CATALOGUE,报价单或者另寄样品供客户选择也是经常采取的做法。
1) Art.No.102 is our newly launched one with superb quality,fashionable design,and competitive price.
2) We have a good variety of colors and sizes to meet with different needs.
3) Our products are enjoying popularity in Asian markets
4) To give you a general idea of our products,we are enclosing our catalogue for your reference.
第五:激励性结尾一般我们在开发信的末尾会写上一两句希望对方给与回应或者劝客户立刻采取行动的语句。
1) Your comments on our products or any information on your market demand will be really appreciated.
2) We are looking forward to your specific inquiries.
最后:任何可以打动客户的特殊东西都可以随信而发或者随样品而寄。比如你在展览会上和客户拍的合照,可以随信而发,既可以提醒客户你是谁,让客户一下子就记住你,也可以更加表达你和客户的友好关系。
比如客户平常随意说出的某张一直在寻找的CD或者DVD,或者客户一直在找的一本书等等,你可以随着寄样品时一起寄出,让客户知道你一直关心着他们,你的SERVICE一直是最优秀的,你会在做生意的过程中关注任何需要注意的地方,会让客户更加放心你的做事态度。
[color=red:b9fe6b12ee]开发信范本2--简洁[/color:b9fe6b12ee]
Dear Sirs/Madam,
We got your infomation from internet.(告诉客户你从哪里搞到他们的联系方式)
I am Michael who is a sales service of ABS SYSTEM. (告诉客户你是谁,什么公司)
Thank you for spending 1 munites reading our mail. (要客户继续读信必须说的客套话)
ABS website system are very POP in Europe,Canada,U.S.A,Japan,China,Hongkong...etc.
ABS website will be your Business key.(Pls check attach picture) (简要说明产品,邮件里可附产品图片)
what is the advantageof ABS website system? (说明你产品的优势和对客户的好处,激发购买欲望)
1.Help you save marketing cost,you will have 7*24*365 show roow online.
2.Low cost business mail system you customer will not Spam you maill again.
3.Easy control your website infomation and just a office girl can do it.
4.You customer will visit you website in hight speed in anywhere in global.
If you are interested in them,we will send our quotation and specifications to you.(这句点题,若客户感兴趣会让你报价的)
Any questions,do not hesitate contact us.(结尾,说明服务周到)
Best regards,(标准格式)
秦丹
多谢!很有参考价值.
2010-01-18 12:21:25
zhangyiao
多谢分享
2009-12-24 16:27:44
郑君
郑君
QQ:1251018798
MSN:china_junzheng@hotmail.com
天津海越国际
各位业务:
请注意,目前现在外运东南亚仓位不好超18吨的货一律一票一议,18吨以下可以轻松上,最好提前两个星期确认仓位和运费。
中国外运
2009.12.22
2009-12-22 10:27:15
jiacherry
恩!研究中~
2009-12-21 11:43:15
赵津
thanks!!
2009-12-17 13:43:49
李名
是很不错的.收藏
2009-12-15 12:25:46
陆璐
拜读三遍完毕!!!
Luis Lu
59177669@qq.com
86-13095947085
专业模具开发,铸造,精加工,出口
宁波力利模具机械有限公司
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2009-12-10 10:18:56
李志发
xiexie
2009-10-12 15:26:47
颜丽辉
好东西~~~~~~~~~~~
2009-08-25 15:22:37
chensabrina
学习了
2009-08-24 11:25:31
闫春杰
学习
2009-08-22 10:56:21
Andywang
不错啊
2009-08-21 00:14:59
曾凡云
路过,学习一下
2009-08-19 16:58:34
黄晨菲
收益ing。。。。。
2009-08-14 08:18:24
桑全军
好帖子呀,别沉了
2009-08-06 10:54:28
郑华
学习了,谢谢分享
2009-07-24 09:04:46
李名
还真是不错,收藏下来研究一下
2009-07-20 11:36:19
李玉洁
绝对好帖子,支持
2009-07-18 09:33:50
liuLoby
tks
2009-07-17 17:48:10
AdaWang
谢谢
2009-07-17 15:18:08
winnieli
看看
2009-07-17 15:10:09
袁小勤
路过
2009-07-17 11:24:34

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