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罗先生
展会后我的开发信,请高手指教。。。。
Dear Mr. Alvaro Castillo Altmann: How are you! Wish everything well with you and your esteemed company ! Thank you for your interest in our products during the 10th auto show in Beijing .I am * from* , specializing in manufacturing engine valves for gasoline, diesel engines of automobiles, motorcycles and lawn mower,etc ,also we produce high strength bolts and nuts. Now I am writing you to introduce ourselves and we sincerely want to take this opportunity to enter into business relationship with you. we are capable to supply you at a reasonable price,OEM service ,prompt lead time Welcome to vist our website:* Should any of these items be of interest to you,please feel free to contact us ! We are looking forward to hearing from you soon. Finn * Factory add:* Tel: * Fax: * MSN: * EMAIL:* Web: * 请高手指教。。
廖一旭
写得很不错!
2009-04-15 18:36:17
zhaocindy
8) 其实还不错~
2009-04-15 18:00:48
宋佳龙
很流畅啊 不过希望达到你写这封邮件的目的
2009-04-15 15:43:13
罗先生
大家看了贴,别不回啊,留个意见或看法哦。。。 :lol:
2009-04-15 15:17:30
梁登钦
不错的邮件
2009-04-15 12:24:18
杜姝蕊
very good 如果能不那么正式,可能会更好点 毕竟你们是从展会上认识的,第一封跟进邮件如果以建立感情,试探对方对你产品公司的印象会更好
2009-04-15 11:30:46
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