外贸社区
李玉洁
国外客户建议的开发信
国外客户建议的开发信 开头:logo Dear Mr Smith Wish you enjoy a great day! I would like to introduce myself. I am Stone Lee and I represent Efront Digital Textile company in Hangzhou, China. We are glad to know that you are a large retail enterprise in USA to deal with …… I was referred by friend in USA retail business who is familiar with your corporation. As a professional manufacturer, I would like to introduce our products to you and offer you a quote. We are a manufacturer of household textile products, including chenille bedspread, Spanish bedspread, tapestry wallhanging, throw, tapestry cushion, chenille carpet, upholstery fabric and more which are all digital jacquard machine weaved by import looms(16 in total from German and Italy). The catalogue I attached includes just some of our high quality products. Please visit our website at www.xxxxx.com We have passed through ISO9001:2000;ISO14001:2004;ecological textile certification. It would be our pleasure to begin a business relationship with you and supply your stores with our quality products,\. Sincerely yours,
chensabrina
简单,明了,不要介绍太多了才好
2008-07-08 17:04:05
刘仁森
虚心接受,请大家多指教
2008-07-08 08:57:03
张翔宇
老外建议的?
2008-07-07 14:34:46
严美华
:oops: 好象不怎么好....
2008-07-02 09:58:02
LiuJie
开发信最大问题是容易被当成垃圾邮件而直接被删掉,客人都没看到。所以邮件主题,还有信箱显示名称,要好好总结。
2008-07-01 09:12:28
caishelly
:oops:
2008-06-30 11:56:59
LewAdam
太长了
2008-06-25 15:36:21
caishelly
罗嗦,说百了,可户只看关键词
2008-06-25 09:12:25
陈建兵
开发信还是简单点好
2008-01-03 13:39:11
徐竞
恩................................
2007-12-30 09:56:12
洪艺清
说句实话 一点都不好
2007-12-29 08:20:31
ZhanTracy
忽悠啊 :D
2007-12-28 13:42:42
qiuluyan
怎么觉得是国内业务员自己写的哦
2007-12-27 15:35:58
NickZhou
这个是国外的客人建议的吗?我觉得的确没有必要写那么多,说明你的产品就行了`我常常在邮件里附上图片,是直接附在邮件里,可以直接可以看到,但是这种方式好象会被打成垃圾邮件,所以建议大家用文本格式发邮件,有了联系再用超文本,毕竟有了联系才会有下一步。
2007-12-26 21:38:17
李名
还是不错的,可以参考,集百家所长
2007-12-14 11:18:55
纪建材
学习中···这里面的很多句子值得学习啊
2007-12-03 08:21:44
LeungSunny
太长了,客人哪有时间看甘长,最好十句话以内。
2007-12-03 00:40:32
李玉洁
:oops: 虚心接受,请大家多指教
2007-12-01 10:34:23
甘伟菁
呵呵,真的是国外客户建议的吗?没必要写这么多把????????
2007-11-30 18:53:30
夏晓丽
我也是觉得好烦,我觉得还是简单点好,一目了然!
2007-11-24 14:56:23
子涵
我也觉得不怎么好,太正式,实际上用起来没必要这样,简单,明了,就行了
2007-11-24 12:05:11
katherinecheung
不是很好,没必要介绍那么多。只要说明你是谁,哪个公司的,来自哪里。做什么产品就OK了。
2007-11-24 11:01:39
写评论